A lone star twinkles,
Vanishing from my sight.
Blinking to a beat,
One can't hear.
I ask it to stop
The blinking and twinkling
It says to me,
I shan't today.
It matches my heart,
The rhythm of the star,
It looks down on my windowsill.
Where I sit with wonder,
Looking up at the sky
My heart doesn't seem to still.
I stare at the star,
And it stares at me back
A game we play all night.
For morning shall come,
The dark blanket disperse,
And I shall stare solemnly at the sky.
***
2 am thoughts, a star caught my fancy. Need I say more? :)
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being and astronomy admirer whenever someone write about star, constellations and stellar .. i love it ! .. 2 am Thats the beauty of it can brew you at anytime :)
ReplyDeleteWah Ankur! Something about them no. Magicall :)
Delete:) I also love night sky. It's so nice to become friends with a star. I too had written similar type of poem sometimes back( My lone star!)
ReplyDeleteAah how lovely! Although I couldn't seem to find it. Link it to me please?:)
Deletehttp://vandanasharmaa.blogspot.in/2013/09/my-lone-star.html
DeleteNow I feel like lying on my terrace and gaze at the sky till I fall asleep. DAMN MOSQUITOES!!
ReplyDeleteLovely this one!
Hahah ghar pe kaala hit rakhneka :p
DeleteThank you :)
I love watching the stars too :) Imagine lying on a hill top just watching the stars ... Sigh!
ReplyDelete*sigh* totally get you woman. I cant get enough of that picture in my mind :)
Deletea lone star caught ur fancy? thank god, i have company..!! btw, lovely words!
ReplyDeleteHehe yeah. Well the star shall have to suffice for now :)
DeleteI'm sure the star loved your company. :D I wish I were as lucky, though, all I can see from my window at night is the blaring street light. (that kinda rhymed... weird.)
ReplyDeleteHahah not weird. Let's explore your potential for poetry too :p
DeleteGazing up at the stars is the best way of relaxing ... Gradually you forget everything... It feels as if you are flying there in between the stars...
ReplyDeleteThis is what I used to do like a couple of years ago... Just go to the terrace and stayed there for hours... Every one in my family knew where to find me after dinner :-D
I still do some times...
Lucky you to have a terrace babe! The window is all I'm getting.eh I'll work with itt :D
DeleteAnd totally agree, nice to escape sometimes no? :)
Oh you have no idea....!!! I can't live without my terrace !!! :D
DeleteI think when I leave for college, this terrace will always be on my mind!!!
I have so many memories attached with this terrace!!!
Aah makes me jealous. I'm sure it must be fabulous. I've always wanted a terrace wala home!
DeleteI had been searching for creative writing blogs since I can't get enough of them. Then I landed here. I sure am glad because your writing is so charming. Loved this piece here and couldn't stop imagining the night sky all the while.
ReplyDeleteHave a good day! (◠‿◠)
Whoa I hope you have an amazing day too! Welcome to my lil blog space! Thank you thank you. Your words charmed me! :)
DeleteAh...star gazing can be so relaxing! Must tell you that you have a mystical quality in your writing. Loved every bit of the blinking and twinkling game :)
ReplyDeleteAah Vinodini thank you so much. I cant even begin to tell you how happy was I to read this comment <3
DeleteJust the right time for star gazing! :) enjoyed the poem.
ReplyDeleteIsn't it? :) Thanks Nila :D
DeleteAise padhoge toh paper mein taare hi dikhenge :P On a serious note, stars always catch our fancy making us feel connected, don't they Sabeeha.
ReplyDeleteHahaha paper khatam bhi ho gaya yay! I can look at stars all I want. And the new moon too ;)
DeleteOh what a delightful poem...:)
ReplyDeleteThank you so very much xx
DeleteThis is beautiful imagery!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak!
DeleteBeautiful Sabeeha :) I love gazing at the stars too :)
ReplyDeleteThanks swathi.arey I'm sure it must be beautiful at your place. Lucky you :)
DeleteIncredible........you are a great poet ...even I love looking at stars..have you heard this one, if you wish on the first star you see in the night sky it will come true..you should make a wish and recite this
ReplyDeletestar light star bright
the first star I see tonight
wish I may, wish I might
and make my wish come true tonight..
:-) read this somewhere.
Aah I wish I had known that the other night. I had a wish I wanted to wish :)
Deletenice that the poet finds time to look at the stars from the window sill in this day & times...
ReplyDelete:) thank you!
DeleteJust adding my appreciation to all the above comments. Wonderful :) Ah 2 am...I think I was thinking about zombie apocalypse ;) :D
ReplyDeleteHahah thank you Gaurab. I hope such thoughts never occur to me :p
DeleteThat is the beauty of a writer..we make normal things much much more beautiful..Enchantress here
ReplyDeleteAha Nikita I know exactly what you mean :)
DeleteAmazing! The beauty of a tiny twinkling star has been brought so well! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Reema, star spoke for itself!
DeleteGazing at stars at 2 am and playing games with them..such a soothing relaxing thought :) loved it !
ReplyDelete:) thank you! It was very soothing :)
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ReplyDeleteJust a small way of letting you know that I like what you write and also your comments on my posts :)
Thank you Vinodini :)
DeleteAaah.... Must be a lucky star that you caught it. :) Nice poem and you should fish for stars more often. Just a casual suggestion.
ReplyDelete-Samik (http://dreams-on-paper-leaves.com/)
I shall :) maybe even the moon and clouds shall accompany :)
DeletePlaying with a lone star is the most interesting game in life.
ReplyDeleteIndeed!
DeleteReminds me of home.. Stars are such a rare sight in the city..
ReplyDeleteYepp indeed. I could only see one :(
DeleteI love looking at stars too! Great starry company :)
ReplyDeleteNice poem :)
Isn't it Anita? :) Thanks for the read!
ReplyDeleteYou've given a very beautiful mystical appearance to this poem. it was a pleasure reading it. You could recite your poems to these stars tonight, if you happen to see them at the same place again ;)
ReplyDeleteHehe I probably will be in the same place :) I shall convey it to them ;) Thank you soumyaa
DeleteMidnight.wow...i dont read poem usually.this is simple n superb.
ReplyDeleteThank you Prasanth. Poems are best to read :)
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ReplyDeleteThank you Sahitiii :D
DeleteTHis is one thing that i miss so much.. nights with clear sky.. remember back in village in punjab slept outside in open and clear sky ..
ReplyDeletehere sleep inside all the time so no chance..
Loved reading about the start .. beautiful
Bikram
Unfortunately there was only one star up :( the city is horrible like that Bikram.
DeleteThank you!
What a gorgeous write. Most of my poems are written around that time. Loved the third verse.
ReplyDeleteThank you Saru. Isn't that the best time to write? :)
Delete"For morning shall come...." - I like that! Lovely poem. I could picture you stargazing and being inspired :)
ReplyDelete:) Doesnt it always! Thank you :D
Deletesuperb....
ReplyDeleteThank you Dwitiy!
DeleteI really miss star gazing. Your poem inspired me to do it real soon. :)
ReplyDeleteDo write about it Pooja :) will look forward to it!
Deleteaaaahhh - those amazing nights with clear sky... I Loved your poem dear:-) Very inspirational
ReplyDeleteThank you Eli :) dont get too many glimpses of the stars in Mumbai :)
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Hehe thank you S :D
DeleteVery beautiful poem! Ah!! Even I love gazing at the stars so much that I added it as my blog background...Just like you ! Cheers!
ReplyDeletehehe thankss! :D:D
Delete:) Thank you!
ReplyDeleteI love stars and the shapes they form ... beautiful poem :-)
ReplyDelete:) thank you Amrit!
DeleteBeautiful lines. Very well penned.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indrani :)
DeleteStar-gazing has to be one of the most fascinating activities in the world. It's real and surreal at the same time and plucks you out from your little earthly existence into the wondrous realms of the universe.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned poem. :)
Isn't it? :) Thank you!
Deleteonly one word magical :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
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Hehe Thanks!
DeleteReally sweet post!
ReplyDeleteStars are sweet too..
they don't question just blink to answer :)
Thank you viditi! Welcome to my blog
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ReplyDeleteThank you Reema :)
DeleteThe 2 am poem.. Nah, you needn't say more Sabeeha. Your words said everything above :)
ReplyDeleteHehe Thanks jyotsna!
DeleteHi my dear Midnight scribbles,
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Deletewow.. needless to say what a beautiful scribble from you, Sabeeha :)
ReplyDeleteThank you dear
DeleteHey, this was such a beautiful piece!
ReplyDeleteI loved your little time with the star :)
I miss my home town after reading this
ReplyDeleteA good one thou
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