I knew this day was to come.
He would leave me.
Scattered.
Broken.
Beyond repair.
We could never be,
he'd said.
I continued to love him.
Each broken bit,
Each inch of my being,
Filling his flaws with my reason.
I drowned in his delicious words,
Carried away by his waves,
Surrendered my being.
My body lit up at his name,
My voice shook with anticipation
Fingers trembled at his thought.
What a sight he was!
Butterflies invaded my tummy,
Words they were stuck.
In a whirl, as a storm would.
Destroying me bit by bit.
Upsurged my heart they did.
I was dying each day.
Yet loving him was deliciously sinful.
What was I to do?
I was tempted.
I'm still tempted.
Only if he could have known your feelings then, this poem might have sounded even more sweeter.
ReplyDeleteBut all the same, I am amazed by the spontaneity you write - or scribble - your poetry. Keep up doing the same.
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Perhaps its fiction :)
DeleteThank you!
Will do!
i love the way u write so much ^_^ totally felt the words in poem.. i am still tempted to read the poem again :D keep writing Sabeeha !! ur poetry is way to beautiful like u ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank you Sachin for your kind words :D
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ReplyDeleteI know it's wrong
but what should I do
sometimes temptation is too strong to let go.. isn't it ?
*knowing grin*
DeleteI was tempted ;)
"I was dying each day.
ReplyDeleteYet loving him was deliciously sinful.
What was I to do? " - love can be naughty at times, playing with our hearts ... loved it :-)
True Amrit. It plays more than one game. Thank you :)
Deleteloved this poem
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteSad poem, but so beautifully composed, the end-result is sweet with a tinge of sadness!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletea nice composition indeed :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deletepoignant poem :) .. isn't that what love ask for .. be the keeper of one's heart ?
ReplyDeleteIt did, but it doesn't work out always. Thank you :)
DeleteSuch is the charm of a broken heart. Sad yet beautiful.. Lovely !
ReplyDeleteTrue!
DeleteThank you :)
Very very Poignant.. Loved it.. Yet loving him was deliciously sinful - Lovely and so true in some cases
ReplyDeleteYep indeed!
DeleteLoved it. Broken hearts make excellent poetry. :)
ReplyDelete*Sigh* yes they do!
Deletewooowwww.......this is just mind-blowing...keep it up! Tempted...to write more...:)..WOW!
ReplyDeleteThank you Amrita :D
DeleteIt feels awesome coming from you!
Very well expressed. Nice choice and flow of words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Indrani :)
DeleteNice powerful flow of words from deep within...
ReplyDeleteThat was such a sad poem. Some temptations are just not worth the heartache, though..
ReplyDeleteWell that's true Sreesha :) some aren't perhaps
Deletevery nice poem! touchy <3
ReplyDeleteWell written ya.... Left me in my zone of thoughts for a while...
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
Deleteyou writes so well,,,keep going.
ReplyDeleteThank you Tashi!
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